Wednesday, 31 July 2019
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Hi Hosanna, Pippa here from Paroa School,
ReplyDeleteI really like your piece of writing and the descriptive language you put in it. Next time it might help if you put other words for sentence starters instead of just having "I". Other than that it was really good!!! Here is a link to my blog, http://paroagreypippar.blogspot.com/
Hi Hosanna,I'm a student from Makauri school.I like that you have
ReplyDeletedescribed about what you would do as a tree in the fall great.I think that you have done a great job of describing your writing and what your leaves have done.I also like how you have put a back ground, and put a background on your writing. You've Last year we did fall writing.I like that you had made your font interesting when.Great job Hosanna!.
Hi my name is Hosanna.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback I will try and double think about it next time.